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Professor Learn Online

Please proof-read a letter to enroll in a class to a professor?

Below is a letter that is not well thought out. I'm frantic and believe I could write a better letter but am just not calm enough to do so. Please give me any imput on rewording anything that sounds weird.

Dear Professor N___,
Please consider allowing me to re-enroll in your CH100 31856 online class. I was anxious to be in this class because, unfortunately, I am not accustomed to strong accents of many professors in the R____ campus chemistry department. I find a vast langage gap when trying to learn chemistry from professors with an accent. I'd like to take your online course where accents, for the most part, are not involved. I was enrolled in your class. However, I was dropped because the M______ College website did not recognize my upcoming Stafford Loan as a tuition payment.

Best Regards,
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Dear Professor N___,
Please consider allowing me to re-enroll in your CH100 31856 on-line class. I am anxious to be in this class because, unfortunately, I am not accustomed to the strong accents of other languages. I face a vast communication gap when trying to learn chemistry from professors with a strong accent. I'd like to take your on-line course where verbal differences are not involved. I was enrolled in your class. However, I was dropped because the M______ College website did not recognize my upcoming Stafford Loan as a tuition payment.

Best Regards,
(I think it would be good to explain what your financial situation is now, how it enables you to take the course and complete it this time)